What am I going to do without you?
He felt completely devastated.
But why? what went wrong?
A few desperate posthumous questions on the perimeter of a centreless circle.
He felt like his heart was taken out by someone, raped and smothered by two hands with the blood flowing through the arms.
A tear from his agonized eye found its way through his cheek like an unstoppable scream.
And she exclaimed ’Dont cry love. You have got beautiful eyes. Dont hurt them for me. I don’t deserve your pain’
She slowly walked away while his heart was still lying der… on the pathway…raped and smothered.
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Smthn in the end shook me up.
Very forceful…like a sudden impact!
keep it up man!
will read other posts too…
Thanks man…
dude this is one thing i would hate and love commenting on, at the same time….
Well i guess thats sumthng which can not be commented upon..
sumthng touhcy and close to heart… “raped and smothered….”
this line makes it worth reading….
“A few desperate posthumous questions on the perimeter of a centreless circle”
i understand…bt thnx 4 appreciation!
dude. this is somthing intense. something everyone wont undrstnd. evn i dint, to some extent. but whateva i got , i gotta say that u have changed into something that cannot b described in words. each and every word makes an impact on the reader and u wish that it dosnt finish . at the end it forces you into thinking , i dn know what ,but it does. amazing man.!!!
Dost…sab IT industry ka kamaal hai…:p …bt really thnx man…coz wat u felt was wat i wanted to mk the reader feel…hp 2 improve myself further!!
The Heart asks Pleasure first.
And then, Excuse from Pain.
-Emily Dickenson
M touched.
If I can stop one heart from breaking
I shall not live in vain
Emily Dickenson
Felt really bad after reading it….but i guess that was the purpose of it…very strong post…and in my view…more than any other post in your blog..!
Thnx…yeah dat was the purpose…hope 2 get better!!
tuff 2 comment on this…
beautifully expressed d pain…
thnx bro…i guess its ur first visit 2 da blog…dat too after a lot of request…huh…4 da record..i hate u mr den u hate to read my posts…
I really like the mode that u have caught throughout man!!! Real gud!!!
Thanx man…n I appreciate all the suggestions dat u hv been givin me regarding my writin..!!
Confused….its painful..yet worth appreciating…
m not clueless bout the origin of these thots…which makes me appreciate this even more…
but i wud love to see no more of such blogs…
Writer…defensively speaking, even a bad one… needs a muse boy…so no issues…thnx 4 ur concern n comment!
dude i like d way u r writing such blogs…its really readable n enjoyable…..so keep on…
nice write dude…!
yeah…i love u….
jyada kuch samajh to nahi aaya but whatever u hv written is really impressive especially that “posthumous questions on the perimeter of a centreless circle” phrase or clause i dont no.
Nice thought! future Rushdie is in the making …